Reviews for Frost Pink
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
Your turn of phrase and use of metaphor is as always wonderful.


Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Great poem. I like the title. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a wonderful day.

~Twilight Starr~
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
good work. nice job with all the details
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
This flowed so well. It was one of those times where you just glide through the words without having to slow down or read over parts more than once. I love the abstract nature of this poem. Also, 'tongue-tangled-tango‘s' is just a plain awesome phrase. You should have used that for the title. Once again and always, amazing work.

Peace, Daze
b-U-b-TRUE chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
I love this. Beautifully abstract. Well done!
Julius Gillian chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
I like the relaxing flow of this piece and the way you describe the friendship between these characters. Very pleasent.