Reviews for City
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 11/12/2007
I like the format. I think the second stanza is the strongest, and the first line really drew me into the poem.
Lyrical.Love chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
love it.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
Great poem.

~Twilight Starr~
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
nice wrok. keep writing
ZombieMcQueen chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
I liked this starting out, as I can emotionally relate to the first four lines, but then you kinda lost me with the metaphors here. it's nicely done, I just got confused as to where you were going with this.