Reviews for Lies
andylikesthesmellofspring chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Squidy chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
I disagree with the other reviewer, I mean, the 'killed me with a glance' phrase has definitely been overused, but I think you used it perfectly with the context of the first stanza. Awesome.
Chester Gills chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
I do like the second half, and I mean no offense by this, but I think the 'killing with a glance' metaphor has been beaten blind. I would love to see this with some more length on it, though I know as well as anyone else that sometimes less is more. Either way, not a bad read, and thank you for checking out my work.