Once again, great humor! Loved the main character! Peter could have used a little more definition though. Otherwise-excellent!

Amazing. That was too funny and Peter is hot!

I love this one-shot! It's just so... unexpected. Okay, so maybe it is a LITTLE bit expected. I just love it- love Devonny, love (to hate) Ryan, and OF COURSE I love Peter!

Sorry for not giving a more "well-rounded critique", but it's 4 AM and I'm having a fair amount of trouble writing something coherent. But no matter... This little fic is delicious and slightly evil, and I was grinning by the time it finished. So, uh, WELL DONE!

That was pretty awesome. I usually am not this generous with my opinions about stories or movies but this was a good story even though it was cheesy, outrageous, and not realistic but i loved it. It made me laugh. Kudos to you for writing a fantastic story.

Hahahahaha... That was absolutely hilarious! Some mistakes though, just technical ones. I love it!

Girl power all the way! lmao.

Ryan can go shove his penis through a wood chipper. It might make it look bigger.

And Peter is SO hot! I can't believe Devonny would let a guy run over her like that. I think Peter would be a good match for her.

That was freaking awesome. But the title made me think that the stpry would be lame or something. Still.

ohmygosh

this is the most phenomenal story

ever.

ever.

ever.

seriously.

Hahahaha! This was awesome! Her freak out was positively spontaneous and erratic and I loved it! Fantastic work.

-M

I am woman, hear me roar? She screamed that? Oh god...this was amazing. I fell off my seat laughing when I read that. I had to sing that song in choir. oh god. bad experiences. But amazing one-shot. :)

aw, that was cute. it would be cool if peter really was a lawyer. and you should have added a Devon-slaps-her-bitch-sister scene, that would have been perfect ;)

I know you wrote this like, a year ago. But MAN I love it. I'm pretty much a quiet person but I NEVER let myself get stomped on. Good character, relatable, fun, original, sweet story 8D

i thought that was pretty cute!

That was so amazing!

I especially loved the "I am woman!" part where she went crazy and smashed his car up.

Damn, I need to go crazy like that one day. I never really get mad, I've never smashed things even though I have these urges too.

Maybe I need a punching bag...

anywhoo. this is definitely cute and awesome. I actually really like it. I wish it was a story not a one-shot.

It's good this way. It almost fits. I love it. Devon's awesome. Peter's awesome.

Ryan sucks. And the sister too. I never do get those types of sisters in stories... I mean, how could you do that to your own sister?

Anyway. Loved it, that's why I've already favourited it.

hahaha

I LOVEDD IT

I really did, I thought it was a story (

But AMAZING!