Ah, I loved this story!

Good job :D

~Mia

Awesome anger there. There's nothing I hate more than people who walk all over others. Makes me super mad! Even though it's great as a one shot, I wish it were chaptered novel.

very cute!

i love it!

hahahaha, lmao, that's the best way to get revenge on a cheating scumbag!

the part, when Dev crashed the car is the best:D

Loved it.

I read this ages ago, before I had a fictionpress, account and realy like it. I'm so glad to read it again.

this is AWESOME!

HELL YEAH GIRL. Smash his car good. Wot!

Can I say hilarious anyone?

And your one setting thing, it's fine, actually, you wrote it really well. Normally it'd get kinda boring if the whole thing is in one setting, 'cause it usually drags on, but I really didn't notice it until I read your author's note. )

I love Peter's personality, wink.

I guess I'll have to read your other fics later... sigh.

Loved it!

Fun to read, although admittedly I did feel like whacking the baseball bat over Devonny's head a few times.. but I think most people reading would, tbh.

And I shall finish this infinitely wonderful review with a long, narcisstic, rambling sentence with many long and exaggerated words, and a quote.

"Don't tap it, whack it!"

Gah! I LOVE IT!

Mwahahahhahahaha!

So evil!

he he he

Lyra

-x-

ohmygod. that was freaking beautiful.

it started off sweet and interesting, but when she smashed the car, that was just awesomeness.

*thumbs up* great writing:]

(sorry, i don't spell things right in reviews...haha, i save it for my writing...which i really suck at...but it's kay)

hell hath no fury for woman scorned, entertaining with big LETTERS. well done hun.

haha. the girl's name is candy. haha. hahahahaahahah. it was super. and... it could've used a few more funny moments though. and uhmm.. a bit longer coz the events were kinda fast. it's really good though.

SO FUNNY! i loved it!

I really liked this one-shot...very funny and cute..