Brilliant! Peter is so adorable for a bad boy. xDD

Awesome

I think this one may be even better than the food analogy one. Astoundishing, simply astoundishing. I have no words.

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This was so cute!

I loved this!

I must say, This is my truly favorite short story. I have read it over and over and it still makes me laugh and smile that silly stupid smile! It is written so well too!

Awww! So CUTE. Gosh, I absolutely love it. Ryan is a total jerk. I hope she doesn't get arrested for trashing his car though !

haha. I absolutely loved this story. It was witty, romantic, vengeful and overall just packed with emotion. Extremely well done short story.

this was too cute! Get Mad Baby lol

Definitely cute! I loved it. Quite genius actually, and really entertaining!

I really liked this story. Peter is a babe. :)

Perfection in 5,000 words.

There's nothing more I could ever ask for. 3

Keep up the awesome work!

Hi DevonnyAuriel,

I liked this. It wasnt a stand out, look at me, cant-get-enough-of it story, but it has been a story I constantly look at and read over, and constistantly has made me smile. I'm a little bit of a feminist, and I resent girls who fall over backwards for a guy, which is possibly the reason why I enjoy this story so much - the way it all changes and she's swept off her feet at the same time. (so what, i'm a little bit of a romantic too... :D)

Keep up the fantastic work. You are on my favorites for sure, not only becuase of this wonderful story, but because of the other collection you've created :)

Thanks!

I love the idea of the story. Somebody so meek who gets walked all over who eventually gets mad. "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned". I love it! :D

And this is the smoking couple from that other story I read, right? I see what you mean by the same story universe!

it's adorable!