Reviews for Welcome to the Wonderful World of Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() WRITE MORE! - Jessica Z |
![]() ![]() ![]() Err.. I wish you updated more often. :P I forgot what the story was even about. Lol. But it was good. Next Chapter I think should be about, or at least have a small section of just Randy and Holly. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update again soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really good totally just read the whole thing in under an hour! (and i was texting, heh, mad skillz) but aNyways, it's pretty (and you should WRite MoRe!) soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Her logic makes no sense. But I love Holly anyway! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, now that's creepy. that was again, so alike that story I read on here...i think it was called "it's Called A Cliche" but that may not be it. Anyway, great chapter! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() How clairvoyant am I? And I don't know, but this story reminds me eerily of one I read, like yesterday. Yours is moving faster though, and doesn't have as many confusing characters. But I love yours too, so don't be sad. I think coconut and mango ice cream will suffice this time, by the way. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! She doesn't die, right? Because if she does, her mom ABSOLUTELY has to put a naked Gabriel on her tombstone. But I bet it'll be Randy who saves her. Yup. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a totally awesome chapter. And did I tell you that I loved her smoothie stunt last chapter? I'm pretty sure I didn't...but I really did love it! Great chapters...great story...great smoothies. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who's Sander? I'm lost...but I WILL find my way. I promise. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() He has a girlfriend? What a bummer...it really ruined that great sappy speech he gave. Anyway, poor Holly. But I'm sure she'll be fine...:) Good chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the way she blurted everything out. So blunt. I LOVE! Great job! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Ad my totally scared face." I'm laughing so hard right now...wow...:) So how old are they? Cause I have NO clue... great chapter though! :) Can I have vanilla ice cream this time? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED this chapter. But Ryan got drunk cause he was upset, right? He's been in love with her since forever, and he just realized. Right? :) Good chapter! And i loved the last line, btw. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now I get chocolate? How lucky am I... Great chapter. Again, a cliche, but it's okay. I like cliches! :) |