Reviews for Fallacy
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
Great poem.

Twilight Starr
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
“I’ll love you forever.” forever is definatly fake. you wont be around forever and love is something that comes and goes.

nice work
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
i like how you kind of take one word and manipulate it and tangle it into different lines in different ways :)
VELVETxKISSES chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
wow. i love this.

the whole thing.

the idea, the words, the harsh reality of it.

all in all, great work.

xoxo and all that jazz

Velvet
ZombieMcQueen chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
the emotions are so real here, and they give a good sense of desperation and exhaustion. very well written.