Reviews for Fallacy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great poem. ~Twilight Starr~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() “I’ll love you forever.” forever is definatly fake. you wont be around forever and love is something that comes and goes. nice work |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like how you kind of take one word and manipulate it and tangle it into different lines in different ways :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. i love this. the whole thing. the idea, the words, the harsh reality of it. all in all, great work. xoxo and all that jazz Velvet |
![]() ![]() ![]() the emotions are so real here, and they give a good sense of desperation and exhaustion. very well written. |