Great poem.

~Twilight Starr~

“I’ll love you forever.” forever is definatly fake. you wont be around forever and love is something that comes and goes.

nice work

i like how you kind of take one word and manipulate it and tangle it into different lines in different ways :)

wow. i love this.

the whole thing.

the idea, the words, the harsh reality of it.

all in all, great work.

xoxo and all that jazz

Velvet

the emotions are so real here, and they give a good sense of desperation and exhaustion. very well written.