Reviews for Not Just Anouther Life
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Odd-ball Writer chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
Hm. Where to start?

Some parts seemed really rushed.

Other parts confused me. Like, about 3/4ths of the way through, jeff kills himself, and then evita shoots herself, right? but then a little while later there was a scene with evita? And then at the end all sorts of characters were introduced, and it was sort of hard to keep them straight.

I liked the fact that Jennifer was bisexual, and that she and Sarah adopted kids.

At the end you jumped from the present to the past to the present again repeatedly, and it was very hard to keep track of.

I'm not sure I liked Jennifer going into the army at the end, that seemed really random and almost pointless? I mean, if she just adopted a child, woudln't she want to stay home and take care of her and get to know her, instead of leaving for a year to go to war?

That's just my opinion. Overall? You did a pretty great job. It was a pretty sweet plot, and it kept me throughly entertained. :]