Reviews for Two Places
omgxD chapter 2 . 10/25/2017
Holy crap, this was in second person? I didn't notice and usually I hate second person, but for this I that didn't even cross my mind once! Even after I found out that it was in second person. The characters are so awesome and I ship them. I ship them. I ship them. I ship them sooo much. The writing style was so awesome. I'm just so proud of this story *sniff sniff* Good job!
Ishotthealbatross chapter 2 . 11/30/2015
so intenseee...I love it :D
Ishotthealbatross chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
This was amazing. So brilliantly written.
lee chapter 2 . 7/16/2015
I am happy right now.
polar.amity chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
I LOVE 1st person, when it's well executed. And this was sniper accurate: sexy. Thank you.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/16/2013
This is amazing :) Really well written and the second person was really interesting :)
LifeInTechnicolour chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
I love this, it's so compelling. :)
slipaway chapter 2 . 12/27/2012
god i love your style of writing, it's enticing. i don't think i could write the words down for the way you make me feel with your writing but god i wish i could write down a thousand its like this casual but so real sense i dont know its like capturing human nature i mean i just, ive read it several times over and wow i just admire the way you capture a brotherly aura to their relationship, like this kinship you just dont feel anywhere else and man im just i can feel it. youve got an fantastic talent, pinning down people to the words like you do i wish i had caught you five or whatever years prior man
ImmanenceEnsured chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
This was lovely, I really liked the person that talked (don't know if his name is mentioned) His thoughts were nice and sweet.
greenessential chapter 2 . 4/1/2012
...Maybe this reader is just too dumb. But what did Jack say before the start of the chapter? ... Eh, I'll fill in a fantasy then.

Great writing, haha. :)
PhrasesForTheYoung chapter 2 . 2/27/2012
this is just... awesome
big.break.and.laryngitis chapter 2 . 3/9/2011
Oh good lord, this is amazing. I have a problem with too much dependency on dialogue, so I always find it extremely impressive when a story can be pulled off without much of it at all.

That aside, it's beautiful, near-flawless, I'd say, and the subject matter is handled logically and, I feel, appropriately. I really like that yes, there are thoughts of "what am I doing, what am I doing," but at the same time there aren't inner monologues upon inner monologues of "I'm so disgusting O why do I feel these things," etc. I think this is just, overall, very well done.

Brilliant work.
hamstergirl237 chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
This is the one-shot I keep returning to. I meant to review but I didn't have a FP account at the time. But now I do! And this story is awesome. I love the perspective; that's what drew me to it in the first place.
JustAnotherNothingChild chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
I've got two words for you : fucking HOT. _
BrianKinney chapter 2 . 8/5/2010
Incredibly well written! I'm really happy that I managed to chance upon this story. It was quirky, beautiful in a strange way and overall, a good read. Keep up the great work!
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