Reviews for Two Places
Tigaroo chapter 2 . 6/19/2010
I thought this was rather beautiful. I wish there had been more. The evelution of their relationship, and the readers relationsip to the story...
Ryette chapter 2 . 4/27/2010
This was my first time ever reading second person, and I LOVED it. It makes it a lot more personal and easy to understand what the characters are feeling.

And as far as the brothercest...loved it ;) Of course, I'm a sucker for brothercest. Good job :)
Serph chapter 2 . 7/15/2009
I never knew it was possible to pull second person off until this story. Thanks for sharing
I.Wannabe.Classy chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
I really love how the story is written and how the story is revealed. It's wonderfully written.

I'll be watching for other fics from you.

Feel The Waltz chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
A rather odd piece but i loved it for all that it is. I wish you'd write more on fictionpress. :)
Rachizzle chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
I love second person. This was amazing, favoriting it and everything.~
acousticbruises chapter 2 . 6/10/2008
Very interesting story, I enjoy the POV it is written in, as well as the fact that the characters did not have ages, if gave the mind a place to imagine. I'm not really quite sure why you made two seperate chapter, the second one, also, left off in a bit of a funny spot. Is there any reason why? Good job all around, I liked the descriptions and the overall demeanor of the characters.

Cheers, arielle
acousticbruises chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
"thank god you didn’t know about this before your brother had his jaw broken in two places." This sounds like a line out of a Death Cab For Cutie song ) I shall keep reading )
Kneecap chapter 2 . 5/3/2008
Oops! Sorry about my last review; it came out wrong and I was in a HUGE rush.

It's not often I say this, seeing as I try to deny my serious side when I can, but this was beautiful. Everything about it. I'll admit that reading something in second person was a bit tricksy to deal with to begin with, but, yeah, I really got into it.

I know they're brothers and all, and it's illegal and whatnot, but, uh, I love them. I want them to be happy. The way they both act is a little...odd, but I love them all the same.

Erm, erm, it's very oblique, or at least I thought so, but it deals with a really big issue.

Well done you! How comes you haven't written anything else? This is outstanding .

I'll just see if you respond...most likely not.
Kneecap chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Loved it. Weird but also amazing. :)
four winds chapter 2 . 4/27/2008
i find this really beautiful, and the second-person viewpoint intensifies it, makes it more personal. your writing style is lovely.
pangur chapter 2 . 4/14/2008
this is very well written, not raunchy or taboo in the least. really, i love your style. the second person bit isn't my favorite, but i suppose that's only a matter of personal preference. anyway, you write wonderfully.
cylindric chapter 2 . 3/9/2008
jebus. i really love this story, and especially the way you wrote it.
PindrakeCake chapter 2 . 2/21/2008
Omigosh. I remember reading this story a while back and I'm so sorry I never commented.

Loved it, loved it-On to my favorites list it goes, because it IS indeed one of my favorites.
Orangeena chapter 2 . 12/5/2007
Cute and a nice, original idea! Are you planning to add more to this story? If not, I hope you'll submit more stories soon. I can't wait for more!
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