Reviews for Two Places |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this was rather beautiful. I wish there had been more. The evelution of their relationship, and the readers relationsip to the story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was my first time ever reading second person, and I LOVED it. It makes it a lot more personal and easy to understand what the characters are feeling. And as far as the brothercest...loved it ;) Of course, I'm a sucker for brothercest. Good job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I never knew it was possible to pull second person off until this story. Thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love how the story is written and how the story is revealed. It's wonderfully written. I'll be watching for other fics from you. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() A rather odd piece but i loved it for all that it is. I wish you'd write more on fictionpress. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love second person. This was amazing, favoriting it and everything.~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting story, I enjoy the POV it is written in, as well as the fact that the characters did not have ages, if gave the mind a place to imagine. I'm not really quite sure why you made two seperate chapter, the second one, also, left off in a bit of a funny spot. Is there any reason why? Good job all around, I liked the descriptions and the overall demeanor of the characters. Cheers, arielle |
![]() ![]() ![]() "thank god you didn’t know about this before your brother had his jaw broken in two places." This sounds like a line out of a Death Cab For Cutie song ) I shall keep reading ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oops! Sorry about my last review; it came out wrong and I was in a HUGE rush. It's not often I say this, seeing as I try to deny my serious side when I can, but this was beautiful. Everything about it. I'll admit that reading something in second person was a bit tricksy to deal with to begin with, but, yeah, I really got into it. I know they're brothers and all, and it's illegal and whatnot, but, uh, I love them. I want them to be happy. The way they both act is a little...odd, but I love them all the same. Erm, erm, it's very oblique, or at least I thought so, but it deals with a really big issue. Well done you! How comes you haven't written anything else? This is outstanding . I'll just see if you respond...most likely not. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. Weird but also amazing. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i find this really beautiful, and the second-person viewpoint intensifies it, makes it more personal. your writing style is lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is very well written, not raunchy or taboo in the least. really, i love your style. the second person bit isn't my favorite, but i suppose that's only a matter of personal preference. anyway, you write wonderfully. |
![]() ![]() ![]() jebus. i really love this story, and especially the way you wrote it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omigosh. I remember reading this story a while back and I'm so sorry I never commented. Loved it, loved it-On to my favorites list it goes, because it IS indeed one of my favorites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute and a nice, original idea! Are you planning to add more to this story? If not, I hope you'll submit more stories soon. I can't wait for more! |