Reviews for Two Places |
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![]() ![]() ![]() umm im confused but i like your writting style.. keep it up.. Sabes |
![]() ![]() ![]() very cool story, you make it seem like I was in it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great ficlet. I like the atmosphere that you've created here with all of the things that go unsaid filling all the nooks and crannies of this story. And then to have the second, and last, chapter be all about Jake saying, "'Maybe, you know, maybe this is all right?'" - wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I adore this. :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this It was a nice one-shot! I hope you write more :D :D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant. And really, I can't think of anything else to say. Except, maybe, bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice. there's something irresistible in incest, especially brother/brother incest. this one was hot and sweet and realistic... loved it:)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start! I'll look foward for next stories, or maybe sequel...:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() umm... so well written.. im not used to slash...especialy not the brotherly type.. must say this is one hell of an introduction to this universe Sabes |