Reviews for A Whole New World |
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![]() ![]() You haven't updated in a long time. Please don't drop this, I want to continue reading it :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the hell! U just ended it! No! I so love it by the way! Ur my favorite! Update! Unless u stared it as a different series in continuation of the ending of this chapter? Wich I totally would love! I looooooooooooove u! (Well the story) |
![]() ![]() OMG THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY! Sorry, but I really really really loved your story! I'm kind of hoping that you would continue writing! xD. I love how she was in love with two people at once and how hard it is for her to make a choice. I've read a lot of stories like this one but this is really great work. Now for the not so great criticism, I think it may have been just a little to clique. I mean, like I said, there are lots of stories about how there are two guys and one of them are dying, and the other is also madly in love with this girl. Maybe if you would like put in some really awesome change of events, then it would become more interesting. Anyhow, this is a great story and I hope you finish it. (Sorry but I'm being lazy and not wanting to sign in) Lottza love, Keke |
![]() ![]() wow! At least this wasn't a cliche! :D Good story! Loved the humour! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg i love it when r u gonna update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story has been so crazy. I hope you do finish it. I want to see her reunion with Knight. Gosh, their passion is so strong. I really did not expect Ford to have cancer, let alone die. This story is really really good. Usually, I am not a big fan of stories that have death or sadness, but you made it work so well. I really love Arinea's character. Everyone seems pretty cool. I am sad to see her separate from Knight, I really thought she wouldn't leave. I just wanted to say good job. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() How do you pronounce 'Arinea'? Oh, my gosh, I can't believe Ford died. It as so sad, I almost cried. And I can't believe she left Knight for five years. Will he still be waiting, or has he got someone new? What about Knight's mother? What's up with her? Can't wait for next chapter, update soon! |
![]() ![]() Just read the whole story in 1 sitting; I loved it, but there are many glaring grammatical errors that really bugged me. Also, the story moved a little too fast, and the amount of time that passed between chapters and between scenes in chapters was often hard to distinguish. On the whole, though, AWNW was a fun, easy read that was quite enjoyable. Oh, and if you are going to start part two of AWNW, please do so soon; otherwise, I will probably forget about it and never get to read the sequel! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() damnn.. you got me cryingg overr a storyy..lol i could not stop crying when i read chapter 18 againn.. pretty pretty pretty pleasee with hundreds and thousands on topp..updatee soon.. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() dang this story, is good, not to mention mega intense! totally awesome! please please pretty please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU PLAGIARIZED THIS CHAPTER FROM SOPHIE KINSELLA'S SHOPPAHOLIC TAKES MANHATTAN! STEALER! STEALER! I HATE PLAGIARIZERS LIKE YOU! IT DOESNT MATTER IF YOU ONLY STOLE PARTS! YOU DIDN'T PUT YOUR SOURCE, OR THAT IT WAS BASED ON THE BOOK! PLAGIARIZER! STEALER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. your story is pretty great really awesome update when you get the chance...hopefully soon D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read the whole story through again, and you had me in tears, once again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi this is x-x-x-angel LMAO this is definitely my favourite chapter. The lamp post thing is jokes yeah...so...good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still shattered over Ford's death...TT Interesting... ...I wish Ford would come back from the dead, mwhahahaha... Knight's awesome as well! Please update... |