|Reviews for Butterfly|
| crazyfirefly chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
Oh. Its so.. beautiful? Its a great piece!
| Jerdana chapter 1 . 10/30/2007
Beautiful. Even without the help of a dictionary. Your story is well-written and the feelings for the death of the butterfly is really intense.
The hatred for the brother is strong and as readers we, well, i can feel the hatred he has for his inhumane brother. Very well done.
Do more stories, i'm sure they would be just as good as this. Well done!
| Gelly chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
AHA. THIS i can understand. (sorry if my vocab is kinda limited. I'm still an amateur after all) It's still really well-written and it creates suspense and lastly, cliffhanger at the end. *blurts out inaudible curse words* Ok, on to serious business. I want you to WRITE SOME MORE. One chapter is hardly enough. I would really like to know what happens to that guy with a stab wound in his body. Oh yes, and the butterfly concept was really well used. Yes, that's all I have to say now all I have do is wait for the plot to slowly unfold. I hope it won't take too long. Good luck on your chapter FIVE by the way. )
| Emeycia chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
this is definitely one of your more 'gory' fics.
;_; that poor butterfly.
*pities protagonist as well*
oh yeah, [Failure was not an option, it never was.]
this was cool.