|Reviews for Training|
| Aquafied chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
they are elegant in motion
what a thought
| Needa S chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
| Basara chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
one kind of training indeed...
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Great analogies and imagery. It's so simple and elegant. Great job.
| MallowsWins chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
I love it when someone comes up with haiku that are just plain simple elegance. Amazing haiku here, with great imagery.
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 10/29/2007