Reviews for Training
Aquafied chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
they are elegant in motion

what a thought
Needa S chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
Awesome!
Basara chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
one kind of training indeed...

nice...
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Great analogies and imagery. It's so simple and elegant. Great job.

-C.N
Dale Christopher chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
I love it when someone comes up with haiku that are just plain simple elegance. Amazing haiku here, with great imagery.

Peace, Daze
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
excellent analogies.