Reviews for Does This Make You Uncomfortable?
scarletwillow14220 chapter 1 . 3/10
Soo cute!
Awesomeness in one Author chapter 1 . 1/1
This was a great story I just wished we got a little bit more detail about the story. At least their names.
Julietish chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, a judge wrote this review for it: This was one of the first one-shots I read on FictionPress, and re-reading it made me fall in love with it all over again. It's very simple, but it still has the ability to make you feel for the characters.
It's about two people who aren't quite friends-with-benefits but also not just friends. It all started at lunch, when the female MC accidentally starts to play footsie with the male MC, who goes along with it. That's basically their whole game-they do things to each other that definitely test the boundaries between friends and more than friends, trying to make the other feel uncomfortable. Most of the time, they're too engrossed in not giving in to realize that it does make them uncomfortable-in a good way.
It's very cute and light the whole way through. It's a relatively short one-shot, banking in at almost 1500 words, but it still seems like the perfect length. It never really goes in depth about the characters' feelings, but you still get the idea that they like each other. Does This Make You Uncomfortable? is a very cute, short read that may not be for everyone, especially if you're looking for a deeper story. If you want a fluff-errific little story than this is definitely the one for you, and the ending is pretty much perfect.
Tikatu chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
You should be aware that this has also been posted on instagram, under a completely different author name. We've had contact at . I'm on here, too. Same profile. Send me a PM from this account if you want the instagram link.
sarabeth120 chapter 1 . 8/17/2014
Someone over on fanfiction has posted this in the Austin and Ally fandom and claims that she is you... I just wanted to confirm that. Here's a link to the story:

s/10612675/1/Our-Little-Game

I found another person posting it in the Maximum Ride fandom as well: s/10190137/1/Does-This-Make-You-Uncomfortable
XxX chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
Its exposted, not stolen...
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
The stolen story doesn't exsists...
Vvv chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
Guest: you just made a fool of yourself... cuz the girl who "stole" this story is the one who wrote this one... idk, I guess so...
Zlen chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
Haha aww, how uncomfortably cute!
Artemis chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
**died out of cuteness overload**
RoseshadowPheonix chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
Sho cute that it made me cry
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Really cute one shot! I love your use of dialogue. It's just amazing!
Fiery Dancer chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Very cute one shot :)
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Aw. Cute! I love it :D
Belly boo1099 chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
Ahaha cute story
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