Reviews for Does This Make You Uncomfortable?
Caroline Viteri chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
Aww that's cute. :) Nice little game they were playing there. Makes me wish something like that would happen in real life. xD
Natasha chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
This is so adorable!
Raux chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
Incredibly cute!

It's also very clever. I would have never thought of writing something like this.

Oh, the beauty of the written word, haha.

Awesome work!

BeautyIsn'tSkinDeep chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
Oh my gosh that was soo cute!
OddFox chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
I loved it :)
fymd-mk chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
i love that game! and i love this! it was so cute, im not a big fan of that point of view, but it worked really well in this story. anyways, adorable, loved it, favourite :)
crazed-by-nature chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
omgawd that was so funny and sweet omg great story

long live the geeks chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
This story or what ever you want to call it was cute. It was one of tose things that puts a smile on someones face and makes them laugh at the crazyness of it even though it could happen. Sorry im rambling but it was really good.
thedilettante27 chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
whoa. [*.*]

that was awesome . . .

it was steaming! . . got my heart racing. xP

and adorable one-shot!

daling chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
its good.

spoiled the fun though when you said it actually happened
Sorrow's Smile chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
this story makes me a delightful, cute, fluffy way. Love it!
Violet Thelaw chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
Aww! Such a cute story :D I rarely read one shots for the fear of wanting more haha XD and now I want more!
Chasing Skylines chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Haha, that was a nice, fluffy one-shot.

I liked pretty much all of it; the interaction between the two is hilarious.

Another thing I liked was how you managed to get a lot in in a short chapter while not rushing it.

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bittersweet priestess chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Nothing short of amazing! It made me all fluffy and sappy and all sorts of this happy, giddy feeling you get when you've just read an something as awesome as this. :) Good job! :D
welcome to meganland chapter 1 . 12/20/2008
oh my god.

I loved that :]

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