Reviews for Does This Make You Uncomfortable?
mitsuki44 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
gahh, I think I just got a toothache.

That was almost unbearably sweet.

But it was really cute :)
blithe.serendipity chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
Cute little one-shot. :)
H.R. Hall chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Aw :)
paddywhacked080 chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
oh my god. cutest freaking thing EVER! :D
Warrior-Princess06 chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
'haha..nice it..cute and funny.! :)) Good Job.! :))
I'm-The-Weird-Girl chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Aw! that is one of the most adorable one-shots I have ever read. One of the best, actually. So sweet!
dipintheriverstyx chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
Jessiquie chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
This is the single most adorable short one shot! I absoutely loved it. Short and sweet :)

It was really clever too the way you got around describing them so to speak, physically (a lot of one-shots bombard the reader with too many physical attributes like blonde hair, blue eyes and it doesn't work because theres too much of it and nothing of the story) and I don't know mentally? not the right word choice,but I mean the way there was no names dropped, no place of location broder than school, hill and a movie theatre.

It was really simple, and because of that so much more powerful. Absoutely loved it.
me chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
love it!
Reeech Beeetch chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
This made me smile. Low sap level and well-written, which I oh-so love. Cheers!
AlreadyGone chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Aw! That's so cute! I was smiling the whole time!

That ending was really adorable and clever; I really liked this! (:
FM Radio chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
That was sweet. And not whippersnapper slang sweet but endearing sweet. Haha. I used whippersnapper. I feel proud. :)
libertykill chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
I absolutely love this.
inkybetterdays chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
That was truly adorable. I had so much fun reading it!
Deceptively Sane chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
This was so cute! It was interesting how you didn't use names. Normally I'd be irritated by that, but this time the story seemed better because of it. Awesome job!
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