Reviews for Does This Make You Uncomfortable?
dipintheriverstyx chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
Jessiquie chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
This is the single most adorable short one shot! I absoutely loved it. Short and sweet :)

It was really clever too the way you got around describing them so to speak, physically (a lot of one-shots bombard the reader with too many physical attributes like blonde hair, blue eyes and it doesn't work because theres too much of it and nothing of the story) and I don't know mentally? not the right word choice,but I mean the way there was no names dropped, no place of location broder than school, hill and a movie theatre.

It was really simple, and because of that so much more powerful. Absoutely loved it.
me chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
love it!
Reeech Beeetch chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
This made me smile. Low sap level and well-written, which I oh-so love. Cheers!
AlreadyGone chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Aw! That's so cute! I was smiling the whole time!

That ending was really adorable and clever; I really liked this! (:
FM Radio chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
That was sweet. And not whippersnapper slang sweet but endearing sweet. Haha. I used whippersnapper. I feel proud. :)
libertykill chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
I absolutely love this.
inkybetterdays chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
That was truly adorable. I had so much fun reading it!
Deceptively Sane chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
This was so cute! It was interesting how you didn't use names. Normally I'd be irritated by that, but this time the story seemed better because of it. Awesome job!
butyousaidforeverandalways chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
xfireworkzstarx chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
blackblasphemy chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
I like the sexual tension build up? Why couldn't it go further.

Great job, nonetheless!
Bubbly Girl chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
I liked it! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

Bubbly Girl
shoe-aholic chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
aw... i just read this ) its so adorable
HPRK08 chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
I love how you didn't bother to mention their names!

Cute story :D
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