|Reviews for If|
| Allison chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
wow...that is so beautiful. wonderfully vivid, great poetry!
| felicia13 chapter 1 . 10/31/2007
I adore the ending. It's true and nice and... the repetition works really well in the this. Usually I'm against it, but this is done quite well and quite to my liking.
Seems a little forced, though. I guess it can't be helped when November's just around the corner (or 9.5 hours away...)