Reviews for Going under
Healing.x.Rain chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
I like this a lot! I wish it was a little longer though...

But nice job!
the.alaskan.musical.pig chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
NEEDS. TO. B. LONGER. its like an uncomplete thought, complete it. otherwize its good.
LaLuneD'Argent chapter 1 . 10/29/2007
Interesting... Really interesting.

I think maybe you could add a little something at the end, like "and float away" or something like that.

But it's really cool. I love the imagery and how much impact it has in four/five sentences. Good job :D