Seriously! You're really good!

I like it, I like it a lot. Good job.

That was written really well for your first one shot, it was brilliant! Good job.

I like it. I thought it was entertaining and well written. Great job!

Twilight Starr

aw

its cute.

a little expected. but i liked how it switched back and forth from the characters. ]

SO CUTE!

wow, that was amazing, and i never would have guessed it was your first one-shot.

you should definitely write more.

and fluffy is good!

THAT WAS AWESOME.

holy freaking crap. that was so good. i love the whole hate love thing... i love it i love it!

and u managed to do it in one chapter. wow. that was amazing. i love you as a writer.

i liked it. (: i wish it was a whole story insteead of a one shot tho.

I'd say that this is a very good job for what you said a first-timer one-shot writer like you. I idolized you for creating the heroine strong-willed outside but trully soft and gentle inside. That hero you made is a little irritating but I prefer citing the brighter side of him being true to his feelings, after all looked at what his hardwork had born for him...

I'm just kind of distracted or bothered and confused of the real reason why he left. Is it because of what she said? Is it because of what he wants to do? What? The story is kind of cut-off, it only had its start and the end. What happend in that two months?

Sorry for being like this, I'm just citing...

Keep that spirit high to accomplish a goal and aim the highest possibility you know. Keep saoring!

-catherine_kate-

Brilliantly done! This may be your first one-shot, but it was spectacular. I loved every second of it!

loved it from beginning to end :)

Love it lol

WOMAN!

Really, as much as I love you, you've totally destroyed my countdown.

I'm not too sure I can forgive you for that.

YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BE GIVING ME TIME TO MISS YOU DAMMIT!

But since that didn't work out...

I suppose I can be nit-picky and harshly critique your atrocious one shot

...

Heh, kidding.

I liked it :) *sports ENIG FAN 4 LIFE t-shirt* (it even says, don't even try hatin' foo on the back XD)

I was actually expecting Carina to slap him first and then when he starts going "WTF WAS THAT?" she would shut him up by kissing him...

But either way! I still went squealing, I love all the "hate" they shared for each other.

And I like how you kept switching up the POV's it made it more interesting. Plus showing before and after the 2 months (GASP! Carina, you bitch, how could you be so CRUEL to that eyecandy? Like him or not, there is NOTHING wrong with appreciation of the male sex.) made it more... Bah, I can't think of a good word to describe it.

But I approve :)

I must be going now though... I'm actually halfway done with updating! :D YAY! Get excited!

LOL, yeah, I'm sick, can you tell by my sanity?

Tata!

-scrazy

ohh i enjoyed reading that! the different point of views and all- cute and heartwarming :)