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lael1bologna chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
this is truly amazing!
Anz Pineapple chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
wow :-) i like this a lot. a lot of feeling. intense poetry is the best kind :-)
ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
Beautiful, I absolutely adore this, I love the "back then, the vision of purity/was blurred/ and now, blackened-/"absoolute power corrupts absolutely" bit. Amazing job! Thanks for the reveiws!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
I really like the ending... "a different story/an alternative ending" are 2 awesome lines
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
Aw, again, sad but I really like this one, too. You're a good writer. Keep it up. )
stardustfaery chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
I like it! It kinda reminded me of the stuff I write but with better ideas. That sounded dumb, okay :)
Aquafied chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
“absolute power corrupts absolutely”

-very true

it seems slight themed toward the idea of costumes

must have been the date.
The Postscript chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
Really, really vivid. I love the message and question you present at the end. I especially liked the image "like the darkening prayer/held by pale hands-" - what a stark, moving contrast! Keep writing, k.