|Reviews for Two Boys and a Dragon|
| Chris chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
Not a bad little story, Lars. Now if you could just leave behind your existence as a discorporate dogsbody and join the real world, you and I could finish the big picture. :)
| sarenelsoria chapter 1 . 10/31/2007
Boys/wolves/fox confusing, either pick one thing to discribe them by or another. This sentince really needs to be reworked/"He tore it to pieces on that shrubbery, cap'n. And since it stank so, we left it behind." Your story was very good dispite some gramatical error. I really enjoyed reading it you might however want to revise your summery. it seems a bit diffrent than the actual story. other than that i have never seen this combanation before great idea.