|Reviews for ode to graphite|
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
i think anyone who cares about writing can relate to this.
the words you chose gave power to certain parts and acceptance of others-creating that swirl you talked about.
:) it's fun to read when the words match the imagery nicely.
good job. -ty.
| Laura Schiller chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
This is just beautiful. Yor writing has a higher quality than almost anyone I've seen on this site.
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 10/31/2007
I would have to say that I don't like this much at all... To me it almost seems like you were just writing this because you could not think of a more suitable topic to write about, almosot as if you just were bored. You have good imagery, I just think that it is a rather boring topic and not your best at all.