|Reviews for drowning|
| the prophet apathetic chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
It has been too long since I read any of your work.
This piece had me putting on my skeptic cap at first. I was on the fence, not quite convinced but suspecting I was going to read something rather cliche. And then the way you chose your words completely changed my mind, and off with the cap. [got my hair wet, I suppose]
The idea is one that has been used before, but you have your own fingerprints on this portrayal. soggily squelching...chin-deep in puddles of misery...sneezing in the sleet..
It's very much your own. And to take something borderline cliche and make it your own is a badge of talent, if you ask me. Kudos to this one. I'll be back for more. )
| fallin4ualwayz chapter 1 . 11/2/2007
wow lol u r really good at bringing up emotions in me... this is going in my favourites! SERIOUSLY! i love the metaphor, so simple, but the way you use it to create a whole story that i can SO relate to... its beautiful D favourites!