Reviews for The Dare
littlepenwoman chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Oh, how cute! I dream of being able to write like you do. Very nice.
loves him chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
hahhahhahhaaha,

I LOVED THIS!

That has got to be the most hilarious situation in the world. Her two fingers racing each other made me wonder if she had lost her mind, but then again she was drunk. And I loved your last line. Nice ending. If anything, I'd probably not emphasize her 'ohs' so much, but that's just me. great job on this!
Tecna chapter 1 . 12/25/2007
I think that this one-shot is absolutely fantastic. I loved reading it, incredible. Brilliant work!

Tecna ;)
D-Mish chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Aw! Cute! :D
Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
Aw, cute :) Good job!
multiples of six chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
This is ridiculously adorable! )
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
One-shots are extremely addicting to write, but I'm glad you're addicted because this is a super awesome cute oneshot. (: I can rave again about your writing and plot, but I sorta just did, so no need to again. XD Thanks again to xoxluurve for suggesting this; I will totally add this to my c2! (:
dreamforever101 chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
haha the ending was funny! lol! :D

nice writing! :)

Dreamforever101
beccabrighteyes chapter 1 . 11/26/2007
This is so cool! I'm ashamed to say your main character could have easily been me, but somehow I had the same friend problem, and they were a little more pushy.
TwinkleHeart chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
AW another one going on my favs! i love ur one shotz
santiforthevenom chapter 1 . 11/10/2007
you write cute as hell oneshots.

i'm favouriting you.

you make the fluffy person inside of me dance.
NovelS chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
Ah! i absolutly positivly love it! its awsome! i cant wait for you to update again. casue i have only read one chapter and im in love. haha
queen-of-the-sand-castle chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
OH MY GOD! This was unbelievably hilarious. Good job!
DancingChaChaFruit chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
I think I just melted inside. This was SO cute! Seriously. Even though I'd be so embarrassed if that actually happened to me... but hey. It was so adorable and funny and made me grin. I also really like your style of writing. I felt kind of like I WAS the narrator, and I could really get inside her head. I don't usually gush a lot in reviews, but I just love this so much! *adds to favorites list*

Definitely going to check out some other stuff of yours D
clara12 chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
OH that was too funny, she was so hilarious, especially by:

“The race begins! Index and middle sprint up! Index is leading! Oh, middle catches up! Middle catches up! Come on now, index! The crowd cheers! The crowd roars! The crowd-"

Then I fell asleep.

and hes so sweet.

'i dared myself'

great job, you made me all giddy :)
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