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DreamBeamz chapter 5 . 7/3/2010
I hope you continue this sometime! :)
DreamBeamz chapter 4 . 7/3/2010
There are several mysteries and questions that come to mind as I read this, but I am sure they will be answered in time. :)
DreamBeamz chapter 3 . 7/3/2010
Aww so terrifyingly tragic!
DreamBeamz chapter 2 . 7/2/2010
I love how u bring the story to life!
DreamBeamz chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Amazing, I am intrigued :)
storyteller451 chapter 4 . 12/16/2007
I like the direction in which this story is going...I definelty cannot wait for more ] you're doing very well
Anita Tseu chapter 4 . 12/11/2007
Awesome! _ lol, please update soon, this was great.
Helizabeth chapter 4 . 12/10/2007
so, is Athanas a vampire? good story, i really like it, keep writing, update soon!
Anita Tseu chapter 3 . 12/7/2007
Awesome! Update soon please _
Anita Tseu chapter 2 . 12/7/2007
Hm...is that person a male or female? hm...well, next chapter now _ lol.
Anita Tseu chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
Cool _ who was the boat guy? Charon? Hm...Well, this is cool, and I"m gonna read the next chapters...
Mephi chapter 3 . 12/5/2007
oh. this is nice.

I feel bad for Athanas, though. Goddesses can be cruel...
storyteller451 chapter 3 . 12/2/2007
Very good...true to many legends of the gods that I've read. I think you're a great writer...keep going with the story its really good
Mao The Peacock chapter 2 . 11/16/2007
Oh darn I guess I'll just have to wait to find out more about your main character! :) But no matter how long it takes I'll keep an eye out for a new chapter. Great Job with the story!
Mao The Peacock chapter 1 . 11/15/2007
OMG this story is awsome! Please keep writing! I can almost see the river and the boatman. I really like the story of Aphrodite too. But here's a little advice, maybe describe your actual main character a bit more... But still, awsome!
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