Reviews for takes two to make a neurotic
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 10/24/2008
so not just a bluesman but a nerd too. maybe we have more in common than i thought.
Tutube chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
This pleases my inner science geek. I love it.
SilverTwilight chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
I can't believe you made this rhyme. It's so different, so odd, but usually that's the best kind of writing.


fictitious facades chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
wow. thats a lot of chem goin' on in there and i'm proud to be able to say i understood most of it. it reminds me of how my chem teacher's always like, flourine's such a floozy and i wouldn't want to see what would happen if it got together with sodium. yeah, anyways. i like this.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
Lovely piece - I like the comparisons to science; filtration, distallation, catalyst etc. Nicely formed. Good work :) xx
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
This has a very spoken-word feel to it. It vibes on the sound, yet the voice carries it, or at least the voice-tone I hear while reading rapidly. I like the word spins, and shifts that fold this in intertwining patterns of sound. Interesting read. Well done. As a sidenote, it is great to read these new works of yours. I've missed the style that you exude so cleverly. MD:77