Reviews for to my children at play
rookiewriter70 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
I love your poem about children in the park. I enjoy my children too.
blots of an amateur chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
though i dont really understand poetry (they just strike me as lines that should rhyme ) i can definitely imagine you sitting on a bench park in the sunshine and taking time to enjoy the innocence of the children (cos it sounds like something i would do too :)) really heartwarming
Tecna chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
That is such a sweet poem, really enjoyed reading it. Lovely flow to it, loved it.

Tecna ;)