|Reviews for Inflamed|
| Thats.What.They.Call.Me chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
very nice ;p
writing a oneshot on how someone became a vampire] clever
| l3g3nd chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
haha good use of 1st person narration, good work!
and you should write more, haha!
happy writing anyway!
| whonow chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Cool. :3 I like the voice you gave the MC. The way you vary sentence length and style is great. Nothing's bland here. I normally don't read this sort of thing - and by 'normally' I mean 'almost never' - so give yourself a pat on the back. You know you did well when you appeal to someone outside your target audience. Hehe.
I especially like the bit where Roxanne reminisces about Marigold. Keep up the good work, eh?