Not at all disappointed! It was a great read even if the ending seemed a bit rushed. It might even be better that you didn't write in when he woke up since that would have allowed a much more clichéd ending. The beginning of the epilogue was clever because you couldn't tell right away if the grave was for just Sari or both. I will have to add you to my favorites as you sufficiently strung me along - I basically read all 37 chapters in one to two sittings. And I loved Seth's character and his brief interaction with Matthias. 3

I really liked this but would prefer a happier ending. I am a bit soppy though!

Beautiful story. Thanks for sharing.

So I practically reviewed this story on you other story, the sequel. Anyway, I have to say this story is so awesome its killinv me. I cant live without these two characters. Their dependance on each other gibes me butterflies in my stomach. So I was disappointed to see the sequel making erik and matt seemingly platonic. It hurts. So dont,do that? Seriously. These two belong together. They deserve more time I guess. And if you dont want to continue this story, then you shouldnt have put up that crazy sequel. Sorry I know I am ranting but I cant help it. I ship erik and matt too much to like anything else.

WORST. ENDING. EVER
HOW COULD YOU ;;

Its about time Erik confessed! Seth was right about the intern being in love with Matthias. HA :D Mission Completion

Too cute!

Oh my gosh Mattie is such a evil little bastard. I love it! He is seriously my favorite character. The mastermind is so determined to ruin Erik's professional career... and any kinda career he plans to have in the future. All's far in love and war

What did Erik hope to accomplish witht this meeting? Clear the air with Seth and move on? He should have through his feelings and how he would express them before the meeting. Poor Seth.

Time to flush Mattie down the toilet, but that's not going to happen, so I'll read on, fascinated.

Twisted little f**k. I love it.

Hi! I really enjoyed reading this and I'd love to read the end of this story. Please add me on life journal( Basically I created the account because I wanted to finish the story). My username is iseenotlook. Thanks in advance !

I'm really liking this story so far! You have a great way of writing and it all seems to be very believable. I think you've done a very good job with Matthias as well, you've really shown his disorder well. There are one point I'm a bit bothered by, though - I feel like Erik being in love with him already is a bit farfetched. This is just my opinion (so please don't be offended!) but I feel it would work better if he was beginning to fall in love with him, rather than already being there. There have been signs that he likes Matthias but not much more than that. Honestly though, don't take that the wrong way because I am liking this a lot so far! I'm gonna keep reading on, thanks for sharing this!

Okie...well then, guess who's going to make an LJ account like right now? Seriously awesome story, I'm looking forward to being able to read the rest of it!

Hiya. I'm quite a fan of this story and I'd like to read the rest. Please do not think badly of me for not reviewing this far, I often leave my opinions to the end. Would you mind adding my Livejournal? Its the same as my guest name, LadyHyena.
Also, if you have some need to reply to me through Fictionpress, my account is LiesBehindBlackPaintedEyes.
Thank you for posting such an engaging story. I read it about a year ago and forgot the title, spent the last year looking for it because all I could remember was Matthias's name :) Finally found it, glad I did.