OMG, this story so far is awesome! Lol, but, alas, it is time for me to go. It is 12:51 am, and I am tired.

But I shall go on with the story tomorrow! I cannot wait!

I like Mattie, is it weird that I want to try and put a ball-point pen through someones windpipe? And stab someone in the leg with a pen? Cannot forget the stir stick up someones nose! Oh! I want to see it done my self! done by myself, or watchin it!

Anyways, before I talk my self by going on with the story, I just wanted to say, I LOVE THIS STORY! I do notwant to guess on what is going to happen, cause most of the time I get it wrong anyways, plus if I do guess, and i'm wrong, I don't want to be disappointed by the way I want YOUR story to go.

Love it!

Keep up the good work!

well...at least it is a peaceful way to go. Yeah, I bet Erik is freaking out.

I'm afraid of this "realistic ending" talk.

Either way. I'm excited to see how you end this.

Kudoskudoskudos I heart you~

I don't want reality...

Reality can suck it.

Where do you live?

I'm going to punch you in the face.

(But I still love it and I want to kill you and... growl. I LOVE IT TO MUCH TO JUST KILL YOU.)

First off let me say, you definitely caught my attention with this story. I was hooked from the get go. The promise of creative ways of harming others with stir sticks and pens. What more can one ask for, right?

The only issue I'm having with it is the psychology behind it. You really need to look up Anti-Social Personality Disorder because while I'm pretty certain Matties actions hint towards it, I highly doubt he would he diagnosed at his age. If I remember anything from my psych class ... they usually don't diagnose the disorder till after adolescence, though that is in fact when the symptoms start arising.

Plus, that whole 5 business of getting over it and that it's easy to treat (or get over/ grow out of) and what not doesn't sound right to me.

Honestly I'm sorry if I sound harsh, the only reason I bring it up and bother to comment is because I'm actually enjoying the story. Hopefully it'll be updated soon since I can't wait to see what happens. Poor Mattie, you cant help but love that psychotic little guy and Erik (naive, confused, well meaning, bookworm Erik).

Man now I feel like a cow for being so mean. Please don't be discouraged by my bluntness, it's a really fun story (god I'm demented and insane people w/ sharp objects fun in my book) did I mention I love an angry Mattie more that anything?

Hurry up and update, you lazy fishcake. Oh, and update a softer sin. I command you.

OMGOMGOMG! TODAY IS THE DAY! IT'S THE DAY OF UPDATING! OH, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! If you do not I swear to God I shall find you and slowly consume you as you scream in agony. Or I shall simply stick a pen in your windpipe:) What time is it in Canada? Are you awake? Are you updating soon? Am I annoying you? I DON'T CARE IF I'M F**CKING ANNOYING YOU! UPDATE GODDAMMIT! Much Love from me:) xx

P.S. 'A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding gift a reader can give . Please use this golden opportunity to offer a well deserved praise and/or tips for improvement.' lolsies :D

Fantastic!

Hope Derek gets what he deserves when all's over.

Gak, this story! I've read most of it on my darn blackberry, and my poor thumbs are so sore from all the scrolling. Irrelevant, but still. A testament to its utterly addictive nature. As a student of psychology, and an opponent of the medication therapies that are so readily doled out to the "mentally ill" I found this very intriguing. The characters are great, too! Very dynamic. I like that they have moments of OOCness. Erik didn't stay a push over, and Mathias isn't (always, hehe) a conniving little fiend. The long and short of it: I cannot wait for an update! :D

YES! Right in the face!

Derek so deserved that.. *high five* with Erik!

It might be slightly out of character but things are happening and this is definitely a good sign. Beside now that Erik has someone to protect it isn't so surprising that he would become more aggressive than when all he wanted was to be left alone. He can't remain a looser all his life.

I don't think it was really uncharacteristic of Erik given the circumstances. I womder if the whole punching thing will cheer Matthias up. I'm glad that nothing happened between them now. great job! :)

Happy Holidays to you, too! I don't really celebrate Christmas, but this is a great gift, nonetheless. :D

Wow, I am so glad Erik punched Nazi nurse. That guy has been deserving it for *so* long. What an asshole! I can't believe he made up those allegations about shy Erik, who still has a bit of a fear of intimacy. But it's ironic, now that Mattie finally likes Erik, that his initial plan is coming to pass. Didn't he want something inappropriate to happen between them so he could have some power over Erik? Not anymore, though.

Wow, I know it's repetitive, but I'm still happy about that punch. I hope Nazi Nurse is going down, and Erik and Mattie will be alright. I'm not too worried, because when Mattie's 18, as Anne said, he can wave all charges. I doubt he'd press any against his favorite therapist. xD

LOL, Poor Erik's hand, though. Mattie should kiss it better, or stab it with a pen. xD

GASPGASPGASP!

DO NOT DISTURB.

I was so excited for this update. And now I'm worried about possible "scandal." I don't want Erik to get in trouble ._.

And Six more days until it's over? Even if it's not posted?

I daresay I don't believe it.

You're amazing.

Merry Christmas to you too, Error-Author.