Sad that I'm not going to be able to read the ending but I loved what I could read!

Oh man. Am I dying to read the end of this, or what? Even if I'm unable to, just leaving a note to say that I love your story. Best parts: your attention to detail w/ regards to Mattie's issues and also the fact that you write with both pts of view.

AWESOME STORY :)

Casually claims the 500th review. This is probably one of my favourite stories on the site.

Amazing! Ha ha. I love this story already. Lovely sentence flow.

I forgot my lifejournal login and have no clue if after that we still have to be 'friends' I mean I love the story so far but I don't think it is worth the hassle...

I'm sorry, it's a good book and I'd love to read it and all...

my intense love for this story needed to be expressed.

I just reread AGAIN for le millionth time and jesus.

completely in love this, its ridiculous.

Genius. Amazing. Epic. Kick-ass. You are so many good things that I wish I was! Lol.

I've actually finished reading this a few days ago but only got to reviewing now because of home situations; and because of said home situations and being deprived of using the computer for 5 straight days, I completely forgot my comments about this story x-x hehe sorry. But what I can't forget was the feelings I felt when reading this. Just reading the title sends my mind spiraling in a fit of glee and excitment! Yippee!

I couldn't help but reread my favorite chapters over and over again! I loved this enough to share this with my BL buddy :D Lol she always asks me for stories but I don't send her most of what I read cause we have different tastes and I'm afraid she won't like it. But there's certain fics that I can't help but love so much that I'd jump and text her the link as soon as I finish reading it so she'd read it and we'd talk about it and we'd love it more and more XD Lol, anyways sorry for my rambling but really, great stories makes me ramble XP

What I am sad about is that you moved the last chapter in livejournal :( I wouldn't mind but I don't really have a livejournal account so I'm not sure I'd be able to read it :( A big aw for me T.T hhmm, maybe I'll just hack my sister's account and use that instead...hehehe. Her passwords are so predictable :) Yup I think I'm gonna do just that!

God, as I said. Amazing story. Great writer. And if you still want to publish books, I hope that I'd be able to find it and buy it! It wouldn't have to be mxm for me to wanna read it~ As long as it would have a good plot with amazing characters, Ima sneak away my savings outta the house and buy me some good reading~ As long as there's little to no romance involve with a guy or girl x-x lol. Not that I'm against it but most romance books are so cliche that it hurts my eyes to read :/

Hope I'd see you soon! and I am so gonna find a way to get into livejournal so I could read your last chapter!

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Making my own account would probably be my last resort . Hehe, I know I wouldn't use it much anyways if I make one.

NOOOOOO! That's so mean...x.X

Damn...now I gotta get an LJ account...

God, at least put a warning in the summary or the first chapter or don't label the story as 'complete' when you removed the ending from the site. This is endlessly frustating. If you're going to be paranoid about me stealing your story, at least give me a heads-up. Not everyone has a LJ account or wants to create one.

OW a mean spot to leave us hanging. I hope Seth an Mattie are going to get along well. Kinda think so... don't know why

So when are you going to tell us what the incedent is?

Put simply: an achievement. A powerful, well-crafted story that deals with heavy themes but manages to follow them through. The characters are complex and clearly drawn, with real chemistry between them. While I understand this is an ‘apprenticeship novel’, I am excited to see what this author will put her effort into next. She has all the talent to become a professional writer of stature – I for one would read something of hers that is not slash, because I believe she could treat it well.

I think the ending is disappointing not because it is depressing, but because it is narratively confused and confusing. While we were all aware of this possibility, why were we then lead through such an emotionally intense courtship? At the end, we could have felt ‘this is sad, but it is inevitable, and it is very real,’ which is the response sought by tragedy, from King Oedipus to Macbeth. However, as a reader, the response is only “this is wrong, wrong, wrong,” because it feels like a false promise. I think in order to make the ending a true reconciliation, we should see how the relationship deteriorates. This would be sad, but we would come to understand it. However, I understand if the author doesn’t feel like devoting however many hours of her time to correct this supposed fault.

PLEASE WRITE MORE !I LOVE tHIS, forgot to metion that in my other review:

seriously, i love these guys, they are awsome :)

What? is their more? please there has to be!

I only have an account on , so...

Anyway, I came to mill around because a few friends of mine were also writing stories on here, and I was like, cool, lemme check this place out. And then I stumbled upon this. NOT ONLY was it MxM (my favorite kind of love, by the way), it was ALSO about insanity and other such lovely things. I am a fan. Anyway, I totally understand why you moved where and what and this and that (although I am extremely angry about not being able to read the end yet .) so I shall be stalking you over to livejournal where I can proceed to read everything else! (I realized that really did make me sound like a stalker... I'm not, I swear!)