This was just... beautiful. No other words to describe it. You truly have a gift. *Favorited*

wow! That was an amazing story!

I cried my eyes out at the end.

You're right,this ending is more fitting than if it were a happy ending, though i prefer happy endings too :)

Great Job!

Very good

Wow. This was really amazing. I haven't ever read a story from the the male slave's point of view with his mistress, and I thought this was very well done and realistic. Unique idea, and great writing style.

I don't know why you haven't yet recieved a review, but I must say I'm honored to be the first. This is a remarkable piece of writing, one of the best original pieces I've read here, and I'm glad to have found it. You truely have a gift.