Reviews for The Red Balloon
Zonne chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
That is incredibly sweet and touching. I love the way you tie it all together with the balloon. Hopefully many siblings can find a way to love each other like the girls in your story.

I found the torn card and her sister in the room part a bit confusing though. I think you could change that to make things clearer.

Excellent short story.

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