Reviews for Clavichord
abstractelysium chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Intriguing. You might want to clarify whether the "you" here really loves the "I"... and whether "I" does. It's confusing. The reader doesn't know what images to trust. Also, "lyrics" in the middle is incorrect - it should be "lyric".

Thank you, keep writing!

abby