Brian and Mel are so annoying!

AAAHHHHH WHere is the rest?! Update plzzzzz even after 7 years

I think I'm dying from laughter now...

'I was mildly offended.' I mean...just mildly, his emotions are so undercontrol it's funny

Love this chapter, so deep D:...about him not knowing in teh end who he rly is

GRANDMA! AHAAAHAHAHAHAA

Your undercover agent story is soooooo funny ahahha

I love it...now let me go back to reading...

Rly, this shud be posted under humour too ahaha

OMFG. And right when i was starting to like Flynn!

I am gutted this isn't finished! It is seriously shaping up to be one of the best things I have read on here - original, funny and gripping. Thanks for the read and I genuinly hope to read more soon :)

What the?

Does this sound like what I think it sounds like?

Is Flynn using Julian or is it me? Cause it really sounds like he's giving orders to someone about Julian, that someone being Jakob.

D:

I hope that isn't so, cause I've really come to like Flynn. He's just so fun!

:(

Oh well, just please update soon! :D

amazing so far but im confused is flynn good or bad?

Wow, this isn't what I expected from the summary, but I really like this story so far. I like Jude/Julian in all his anger-management-issues glory, and I like the flashbacks to his sordid past. I like how easily Brian can piss Jude off, and I love Flynn, just in general. The switching in POV is great, too. Everything is a bit confusing right now, but I can't wait for it all to get sorted.

Can't wait fore more! please update soon

While it may be too early to tell, my first impressions of the main character are that he makes the story amusing and enjoyable. However, his internal character is a little too young and immature for that of a twenty-six year old male. and i dont mean 'Jude'. as 'Jude', he is doing fine. but as a hardened special ops agent, his personality is a bit off. he seems seventeen to me. and again, that is just first impressions. impressions which may change as the story, writing style, and tone develop.

keep up the good work, however.

Assume! I'm grinning ear to ear right now. Special ops slash fiction! My fav! ... okay, too many ! marks. opps. Yeah, there isn't enough ops slash out there. and trying to find sam fisher/original male character is like trying to fish in the desert. and that is just one of many pairings i wouldn't mind reading.

the chapter needs some editing but it is still very enjoyable and i am going to prove it by reading the next chapter. right about... now! ::dashes off::

so was julian getting ill before he got pumped up with awesome drugs? cuz he sure seemed confused prior to that...but anyhoo love the story cant wait to read more :)