|Reviews for Dancing with a Queen|
| heal me forever chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
| Annie chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
I died laughing, wow. This was a great, great exchange in cultural information for me and an adorable story. LOVE.
| R. Tist chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
I don't think I'll be able to recover by breath any time this week. :))
| Ngoc1231 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
I totally remembered this story.. and I couldn't find it. But looky here, I found out :D
I thought it was super cute. And who could tell. I seriously would have thought that they weren't straight either..
Love the story!
| Duuude chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
why didn't I read this before?
I love the samoan! :)
| GEN chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Ah frikkin awesome story once again. I love reading all your stories, they're so well-wtitten and incredibly witty. Makes me laugh like a nut!
| Not Who I Look Like chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
I LOVE IT! It's hilarious and sweet!
| blurrylights chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
That was an awesome one shot! It was a really funny idea and extremely well executed. I have certainly never read anything like this before. :) Nathaniel and Leona's conversations were utterly hilarious, and the tension between them, and their teasing each other (mainly Nat to Leona) really was tons of fun to read. Awesome work!
| Green Eyed Angel chapter 1 . 10/13/2008
It's funny. Though why Nate was wearing lipgloss... ew, that's just gross. The story was a bit hard to follow at some parts because of the tradition stuffs, but otherwise it was pretty good.
| kyrric.fictionpresspaperweight chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
I'm MEANT to be working, and THIS is what I'm doing. I should really have saved this for another time I wanted to read something that wouldn't take an entire afternoon, but I feel like splurging. And thanks to you and your writing, (which IS Brilliant, by the way) I have to do approximately a month and a half' worth of work TOMORROW. In ONE day. You're a bad influence.
Ahahaha. This was funny. Your one shots are ALL funny. It's really, really good how you deal with ... for lack of a better word .. awkward themes with something that can't be described as anything other than grace. It's cool.
All your characters swear loads. ALL. I have my gripes with swearing (I just don't never really figured out why) and I hate it when writers abuse it, and litter eveything with loads of ridiculous swearing ... but that's absent here, and you get major points for that. If it makes any sense at all, they swear appropriately. No, okay, that was totally nonsensical.
You have a thing with switching points of view in your one-shots, I have noticed. There's always a change or three. Therefore, I set you a challenge (when Uni has stopped being evil (psht, will it ever?) and when you're not hard-pressed to update any of your other monstrously long stories) to write a one-shot where there is a single point of view. One. Just one.
I'd like to see what happens is all, so sue me.
Did you know that I really, really like the name Nathaniel? Yes. Random side notes. Anyways. And Leona is also a very pretty name.
The dynamic between those two is sweet. Not dysfunctional -awh- but sweet. And there was never anything wrong with sweet. Unless it's like, that scary sweet smell that rotten meat gets. *shudders* Don't ask.
Your non-studying is a bad influence on MY non-studying, and succeeds in making it WORSE. Congratulations. And while I'm GOING to have regrets in the morning, as of now, I love your writing. It's so ... informal. And not strict, regimented story-stuff. Which is always fun. Nathaniel and Vincent sound a little like Jesse. I think the three of them would get along well. Like a house on fire.
I never really did get that expression.
Anyways. I should REALLY go and do some work now. At 11:35pm, with all of three days to go before school starts. Blargh. I envy your Uni-ness.
Write more one-shots. You're good at them.
And with my wisdom successfully imparted, I bid thee goodnight.
(i've been overexposed to Shakespeare, can you tell?)
| i-aspire chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
lol i liked it :)
lol was the last bit a reference to a certain katy perry song? or am i reading too much into it lol?
| blackbubbleblue chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
LOL very funny. pinkamoo sent me.
| Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
Ohh, cherry flavoured lipgloss, yummy :p
But I prefer strawberries and cream!
Very good story you have here. -wink-
| Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Haha very hilarious. I read this before and I have no idea why I didn't add it. :P In any case, xoxluurve did, and I'm very happy she did. (:
| White Rose Blossom chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Haha, that was awesome! Loved it, especially the ending. Well, loved the whole thing, but still :P