Reviews for Poem About Desire
she smolders chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
There's such a raw sexuality in your words. I love the way these words sound read outloud. And the repetition of "drink" in the last lines, just gorgeous.
hey maria chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
I love how you equate desire with hunger, and the way you illustrate it so vividly. It's almost painful, but that's fitting, because we've all wanted something so badly it hurts. Great job.
viennacantabile chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
the imagery is so vivid that it made me feel quite uncomfortable in the 'don't eat me!' kind of way, but that's a good thing. :D this is a very, very effective poem. :D
Silver Rain Fell chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
Whoa! Brilliant. I love how you ran lust and hunger together like that, all the levels this works on. And it's so gory, but somehow also really tantalising.