Reviews for Mousetress
Sangre Del Lobo chapter 2 . 8/12/2009
If the cat lord has arm,or you should say so. How old is the mouse girl? Please review!
Mette Inka chapter 2 . 5/28/2009
I like your story and the plot line is solid, but its all hindered by all the grammatical errors. It might not seem like much of a problem now, but a few words and the way they're presented could change someone's entire world and thier perspective. Which is why I believe that making as few grammatical errors as possible is best. And though I admit that I'm not perfect, I always try to read and re-read over my work before I submit it. So, I was wondering if I could help you by looking over some of your work, or at least this particular story of yours, and correct some mistakes. I don't ask this to offend your intelligence or writing ability but I think that your story has a lot of potential and I don't want it ruined by simple mistakes. Thank you for your consideration in reading this review. Its an honor to read your work.
Lerene chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
Please continue. This sounds very interesting. I wait to read more.
Lady Galriee chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
Good job. I can't wait til your next update.