Hi. A friend of mine just sent the link to this story. And I am now totally in love with this one-shot-wait,no, two-shot.

How is this so adorably cute? Now I really want a cute guy to do that on one of MY desks. Oh, if only...*sigh*

I read the first part. And thought, "omygoshthisissocute". And then I was in the midst of writing this review, when I suddenly noticed something: there was a second part.

Half of me was EXTREMELY CURIOUS. And the other half was EXTREMELY EXCITED.

Because what could be better than a cute one-shot? An extremely adorable and cute two-shot!

My hopes were confirmed, and I am now even more in love with this two-shot. 3

And I completely just realized that neither of them have official names. Well, except for "Mr. Geoffrey". But you get my point. I'm not sure whether to feel happy or disappointed. Happy, because it means I only judge them by their personalities. Disappointed, because I don't have names to go with said personalities. But the story is nevertheless absolutely adorable!

Adorable, adorable, adorable. Absolutely adorable.

Oh Mr. Hall, how in the world did you not notice the writing before? And couldn't you have come storming out just a few seconds later? We (and by we, I mean us readers) were so close to finding out Mr. Geoffrey's first name! Or, actually, you could tell it to us. Yeah, yell out their names! That could work too! :D

wow!

i stumbled across this some how, and it is just so cute! seriously- its the little tid bits like this that restore my faith in humanity!

now if only that would actually happen XD

it read really smoothly, start to end and i didnt find any thing to criticise!

loved it ]

LOVED IT!

I do agree that you are evil. I mean WHATS HIS NAME?

i just know this is going to keep me up all night. hehe

added to my favourites:D

ohmigosh I loved it!

Ri

It was cute! Don't worry, the epilogue isn't meant to be better than the original, just to enhance it. And it definitely enhanced it. :)

You apologised for the teenage-y dialogue. Does that mean you write more sophisticated stuff as well? I am definitely checking your page out :D

Ah, what a sweet story. This is my second time reading it (after a year or so) and I still love it! I'm glad you didn't write the dance scene - the ending is perfect to me.

That was so cute. I love the how the story went and the plot. :) Its also very neat how you didn't write their names. When reading it, I just assumed at the back of my mind that I knew her name, only to later realize that I don't. Love the characters and plot. Excellent writing! That would be so cool if it was to happen in life...Hahaha.

So cute! Somehow, only with a few sentences, I know that

I love that guy.

What a great idea for a story:).

Lol your author's note made me laugh and giggle

HAHA cutely written, loved it even though I've read this plot before, you did it well

I like it but I wish I knew his name I had cliff hangers but I guess they're the best. Good Job

Loved it. Totally original :)

Ah! Playing around in your head? How about playing around with your reader's emotions! My GOSH What an AMAZING Story! I have to admit...I think thins is my FAVORITE story! Please don't take that lightly please. I'm serious!

But an awesome story! Oh, I wish there was more, but I saw you bold warning in the beginning, and yet, out of curiosity, I still read it.

I still LOVED it though. She was cute, he was hot. Very sentimental!

I love how you never revealed their names :) Awesome story!

I find it embarrassing when I start laughing at my computer.

"You'd probably end up looking at what you thought was me, but is actually that creepy guy in the back of the class who secretly plots world domination."

I blame you now :P

Also I've never seen xoxo times pi - that's kind of cute :)

Super cute! I wish it were longer though, I really liked the plot! but I read on your profile that you stick to one shots.. however u wrote that there's a follow up story..where/what is it?:P

anyway Awsome job!D

nanii