Reviews for oh sweet perfection
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
Very well done! we in life often find this to be true. We want something although it is (or they are) "toxic", "fatting" or any other comparison you can make, which you did an excellent job at by the way. I know that espically for me I can relate to this and am sure many others can too )
mandisoul15745 chapter 1 . 11/4/2007
WOW! Great Job! Really like, I really like your second to last stanza. Great flow and all that keep up the good work. The one thing that did have me a little off was is it suppose to be about candy or love or is it a mixture of both? Sorry not trying to be mean just wondering so i can understand better.