this is the best book i have ever read, i was so dissapointed when i got to the last chapter. please please update as soon as you can.

yours till the chocolate chip

BookLovinChick

This story is amazing, please update soon!

-Lain :]

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Oh, that is scary. I would react the exact same way if not worse. I hope our heroine doesn't go crazy! She really should start questioning some people...

I really liked this chapter, made ME get scared!

I like this story so far. It is really interesting.

~Foxie

I feel like a foreigner on fictionpress now! lol. Do you know what I mean? I used to be on here all the time, but it's been months now since I reviewed or posted or even read a chapter on here! It's so sad! I didn't realize how much I missed it until I came on here again . . . Now I'm dying to write again, but I know I won't ever have the time for it. Christmas Break is the first time I can see myself having a chance to write a bit more. And the irritating part is- I already have the first bit of my next chapter written! It's just been sitting there in the cobwebs for weeks now! Err. I want all my writing passion to come back to me. I really miss it.

But enough about that. Honestly, I don't really know what to say as a critique for this chapter, middear. I've already read it once, of course, so I can't really comment on that. And the writing is great as always. Just keep it up and try to update again soon! And congratulations on pumping out another chapter! I'm very jealous of the accomplished feeling you must be having right now, just so you know. lol. Wonderful job!

OH! I love the way you explained Olivia's crazy situation. You know I think that those pills are actually causing the problem, but I could be wrong. Intresting. I'm so Happy the new chapters up! Yea! I'm wondering though, does she remember her tudor, saying he loved her? If not, has he said it every day? Can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!

Oh my!

This is an amazing story so far! Leasel sounds more of a lady than Olivia! Who is supposed to teach her? I really like Anthony and Dr. Nathaniel, and hope to see them more.

Who is Emily Foster? Mr. Foster's sister? Wife? Mother? Hm... so many questions. Update soon!

I am so glad to find a story where there are so far only a couple of chapters so I don't end up with a sore neck and a headache from sitting staring at my laptop screen as I read and read and read.

I like the beginning of this story and I think it has the potential to be as good as the rest of your stories on here. I'll definately be reading the next couple of chapters in the next day or two.

Keep up the good work!

Hey, I'm loving this. Can't wait for you to write more. I love your characters and the way you write. Hurry up.:P

AMyBabe

great story~!

WONDERFUL update! It was very good, and kept me interested. I can't wait to see where this leads; it makes me excited. Hopefully, it won't take too long before you post another chapter. *puppy dog eyes*

Ah, it's so nice to find an update. About time. I liked it. You did a good job with Olivia and... random.. I just forgot her name. Anyways - I like how you kept her perspective in references to Olivia's apparent mental disorder. Well done. I liked seeing Anthony through Emily's eyes. He seemed much different than the last time I read him - He has potential of depth, that.. I don't know... I kind of didn't anticipate in the previous writing. I assumed he'd be convoluted, but I didn't think he'd naturally be able to show a lighthearted side. Not to say I feel like I know him well - heck, I just met him, but he piqued my interest in a not-... forgot the word. I'm just so helpful.

Emily seemed all right. Because she's a new character I recoiled at reading her at first - but she's all right for not knowing anything of her.

I won't lie- the chapter was unremarkable to read - not because it wasn't good - but just because, as you know - it's a re-writing. I do like it though. As a re-write I think it's better. I want to read more... get on with it :D

Lovely chapter! I'm getting more and more excited about this story with each new rewritten chapter I read! Mostly, I think you did a brilliant job with the characterization of Olivia in this chapter. I feel like we've learned so much about her in just this one little section. Also, I liked Liesel's wandering mind, imagining Mr. Fisher and Olivia as lovers and their music lessons as trysts. Very amusing just to think of, knowing Olivia! I'm not sure about the last section yet though. The idea of switching viewpoints is great, but if you don't use the technique consistantly, the sections where you DO go outside Liesel's mind are going to seem a little odd. Just my two cents.

Update again soon!

yay! You updated!

I really like this story...its very intriguing and interesting. I like the main character and how, in each chapter, more information and clues are introduced in various ways. I like this rewriting of the original story better...its a lot more mysterious and brings out Liesel's character a lot more.

Keep writing this story! Its awesome. update soon!