Reviews for Feel the Truth
Matt chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
this last one. i really don't know what to say. it's great, but... wow yeah. we seem to lose everything when it comes to failure don't we? i'm not sure i'm interpreting it right. seems to me that we can't face the truth of our own faults, our failures. i am i near the mark?

for you poetry overall (at least the one's i've reviewed) i love the dark imagery. the rawness and the realism that is implied. i don't really see many bad points. i like that it gives a vulnerability to it all.
sk8rgrl chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
This one is also good, but differently so. It feels very connected, almost like it should be in stanzas of two but each line leading quite nicely into the next with fluidity (is that a word?). Actually arrainging it this way makes it feel more compact and rushed, like the emtoions throughout the poem. Well done! Update on SHE soon? It's been forever!

sk8rgrl