Reviews for the clouds are feeling heavier
catalyst.enigma chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
Oh, Jesus, this is good.
Vinyl Cupcake chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
I love this piece- it's realy dark and beautiful.

Your imagery is great- I especially love the two lines:

"light diminishing, hope as well

the fog consuming me..."

Keep up the great work.

-A Flickering Light
A Scarlet Raven chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
i love this one! i wrote a similar poem several years ago."gasoline rainbows" discribing how the color changed on the street when it rained. it was th only 'color' there was in this grey, rainy world. i found a sence of peace in that.

...yeah. lol.
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
I must sya that you have yet again done an outstanding job with your imagery and constucted a fine piece that many can relate too, which you seem to be very talented at whether you try to or not.
lymli chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
oh my, I love this imagery, it's so powerful the meaning, I guess.

good poem.
thunderr lips chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
This is really beautiful, in a really dark way. I love the way you contrast the colors so wonderfully. I love the feeling of gray that you take away from this.

For some reason, it almost reminds me of a town after a volcano errupts. I don't know why though

Great Job!
the face in the window chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
This was beautiful. I have to said I love your word choice, although that sounds very ninth-grader teacher of me. A nice write.

Oh - and thank you for the reviews!