Reviews for The Electric Girl
Sweet.Surrendering chapter 1 . 8/30/2008
I very much enjoyed this piece. The poem itself flows nicely and I like the story you tell.
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 11/23/2007
That poem flowed remarkably well. I like poetry that tells a story and this one tells a very fine story.

FantasmaLuna chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
I love howyou describe the "electric girl" and the dead roses in her hair. It's the perfect depiction of fractured innocence/beauty! Keep it coming, Rosie! I love you!
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
That was beautiful. I loved it. The imagery is wonderful and unique. Certainly not trite. Good work. Keep writing. So far, you are amazing. )