Sweet little story : D. Enjoyed the plot.

loved it!

Hi Esther,

This is a great story and a unique one too. I think this is the first time I have read about romance with a ghost. How could they possibly last their love? Would one die or would the ghost come back to life? I am looking forward to what the story would turn out!

April

This is way good so far. Very original my friend. I can't wait to read more of your work. Nice job! :D

Great story :)

Such a heart-touching story!

Cute :)

i just think that you are an awesome story teller..and i absolutely love this one..its a bit cliche at the end but i just love how the story flow smoothly..meaning doesnt involve other people..just the feeling of both of them only..completely in love with your story..! thank you for writing this one..!

Thank you for finishing the story!

Personally, I like the fluff! It doesn't feel out of place. I think it helps showing how Malcolm grew throughout the story that he can put the negative aside at the end.

Oh, such a cute ending. From the little glimpses I've gotten of Will, I quite like him...but thats a little redundant.

This whole story has been pretty sweet. I loved the hook at the end of the second last chapter that really turned out to be nothing at all. Ah, they are so cute together.

I also adore the name Caleb.

It means Dog in hebrew you know. I learned that of some weird vampire porn or somehting similar...anyway...redundant.

But congrats on completing youre adorable, well plotted story. The only thing I'd say you could impove on would possibly be your storry summary thing.

Good Job.

Lovelove.

Erasmuss

"It should be illegal for one’s boyfriend to use their bedroom voice from shot gun.” that line almost had me fall off my chair laughing. Also love the part about the brides maid dresses.

I just loved this story. It was so good.

Good ending! It was very sweet!

Very awesome ending!

He's awake! Ah!

Great chapter!

Death cannot part them!