Reviews for Checkmate
SilverIsamu chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
Wow! You are really good! I absolutely love this poem! Please write more!
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
Great imagery, especially in the first line, except it sounds like the fence is broken - is it supposed to be the fence or the window that is 'broken from wear & tear'? I love how you tied in the title to the idea of the game.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
It is...I love this. Again, well written. The imagery is great. Your use of figurative language makes it wonderful. Good work.
Desertion chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
Great imagery and description throughout the piece. The words did more than tell a story they evoked emotion. It draws you in and makes you feel what the narrator is feeling. I loved it! I would also love to know what you think of some of my stuff.