Reviews for Daytime Dreams
Amadea chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
("When pain HAS perished," for grammars sake!) My favorite lines would be "Like sand through feeling fingers, Slipping steadily back to earth. From something special to simple sand, From dreams to daytime and back again." The rhythm you create here with not only meter, but with alliteration throughout, but how "ashes to ashes" takes flight with new purpose. It's trite, but meaningful. It's feel-good and optimistic. I really do love this work.