Reviews for Contrary
DJ Ker chapter 3 . 3/8/2008
It's pull not pulls.

Other then that's it's very good, I think. Well, with the message it sends. All of your these poems send insightful messages. :] Wouldn't mind seeing some more.

DJ Ker chapter 2 . 3/8/2008
Didn't really get this one but I don't go to church..
DJ Ker chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
I like the message you're sending in this poem. And I actually get the whole "immortal men" theory you've got going here. Most young guys actually do think they're immortal, don't they? :\